I looooveded the last line. It was my favorite. :]]

This was sooo adorable. I liked how you put the freckle on his ear in there. Very detailed. This was great! :]

Cayce xx

What can I say? I love that freckle =)

xXx

Very sweet.
"This is just our chapter
Where there falls a little rain." <---amazing lines

Omg this is so good! very cute, the ending was great too! i can really relate to this! excelent job!

Awwwww.. this poem is so adorable... very descriptive and full of love... *sighs* i love it.

it flowed nicely and i loved the way you ended it. 5/5

Sweet poem. It's apparent that you really care about whoever this poem is for. I thought the poem itself was pretty good. The flow was decent and the rhymes weren't bad, however nothing really pushed this poem past "sweet."

Great poem! I love the concept to this poem, it's really deep. The flow was decent and the word choice was good. Overall its a great poem and deserves a 5/5!