by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx Feb 14, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
She stared out the window at the grayness around |
by MyEscape
MAN! That was amazing, the flow and rhyme were so good. But your wording was just perfect. The last line was soooo good! |
by Lemma
Hey great poem. As for a title......Something like "Some things never change." The main idea is that this guy hasn't changed and he's still hurting you right? So I guess having something about change in the title would make sense. I'm rubbish at thinking up titles but I thought I'd give it a shot anyway =) |
by AhmadAfaneh
Well... gr8888 job... i could feel the pain in between the lines. Enjoyed it soo much. |
by Michelle18
I love this poem.... uhm maybe you could title "he's just the same"....thats just a suggestion... |