Wow, this is so sweet.

Parting I want to cry another ocean,
So we could relive this moment again.

My favourite lines =)

Really cute and heartfelt. Great imagery, I felt like I was watching a scene from a film.

5/5

Em xXx

Wow...this is a great poem....flow was perfect... i could visualize every word in my head... i was smiling the whole time... excellent job. definately a favorite. 5/5

Ahh this was soooo beautiful! I was just captivated by your imagery from beginning to end. It just filled me with warmth and left me smiling. The details in stanza two were flawless and effective in creating your message. Everything you described just brought back memories for me which made it even more of a joy to read. This has to be my fave of the twoo .. you write amazing love poems. Well done *5/5*

I was completely moved by this poem. Its really beautiful... Your descriptive words, your emotion, your (I'm assuming cuz it seems like it) memory... it all worked so well to create such a beautiful poem. I'm really impressed, 5/5

Beautiful poem you created here. The title was well suited with the contents of the poem. I really like the setting and mood you started the poem with. It was very romantic and very calm. Good job on this one!

Very beautifully written. Very well thought out. The emotions here were obvious and clear and outstanding done. The flow was flawless and this was a very enjoyable read. :] defintiely 5/5.

Omg!!!!!..this was really good!!!....i love it!!!!

This was really quite nice

i kood feel how the characters felt just by reading the words

and your use of an ocean and beach really makes it that much better

"Water splashing along the tide on the sandy beach,"

^^
'the tide on the sandy' Firstly, I'm not sure how water splashes along a tide, if a tide is what the water is. Secondly, that phrase did not flow very well.

"Laughing burning our feet in the golden sand,"

^^ Not quite sure how laugter burns one's feet.

The rest of the poem was fine. I just didn't like your opening sentences. It really made a bad impression for me.

However, the other verses slightly made up for it. There was a romantic essence in this poem, it drifted in and out. There were a lot of lines I liked, and a few I didn't like. It was a good poem overall.