Very sad
flows good
but... honestly... i expected more.. i mean, you just tell your feelings (good wording btw), but this idea of "invisibly broken" is so good
maybe you can add some powerful metaphors to make this poem more expressive
like... well when i first read the title, i thought abt sea when surface is still but in the depth it's not so or something like that
that was just my idea
but anyways your poem is good

Awww.. :[[ I can definitely relate. I'm sure a lot of people can relate. I really liked the title, and well how you used "invisibly broken" throughout the poem. I wish it had been longer. I would have kept reading. Maybe you could have used some more descriptive words, but truthfully I like it how it is. Great job! :]]

Keep writing!
Cayce