Cool rain

by StandStill   Feb 15, 2008


The pitter patter on my roof
it's my proof
then a thrum
beating like a drumb
outside, rivers cry
and so do i
but you can't see
because of all the streams
the streets are slick
we jump and we kick
and we dance
in the cool rain

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, very beautiful choice of words! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    I love it its very imaginable. like i could see this happening. amazing.!!!!

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