Veryy relatable. I liked how you put the question at the end of the poem. The sad emotions just flow of the poem as you read it. Great jobb!

Cayce xxxx

Really great rhyme and flow. Simple yet sad. Really enojyed it though. I really liked the ending but thought that maybe the last line could be made more concise e.g. "Why not me instead of her." (Obviously so you keep the half-rhyme).

Another 5/5

Em xXx