Million men strong

by deadly sun   Feb 15, 2008


Feeling snow upon your face,
as into the storm you run and chase.
One hundred million flying soldiers,
that land upon your arms and shoulders.
Falling pieces of soft rain,
from the clouds continue to Wane.
Like ballerinas dancing down,
landing softly on the ground.
Settling and sinking to the earth,
while the clouds above still give birth.
An endless torrent the clouds did make,
this endless torrent of the snowflake.

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  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I love the metaphors - i always thought of snowflakes as little dancers, oddly enough, but i never thought of the soldier thing - now that you mention it, it sort of is like theyre marching in to conquer the world or something

  • 16 years ago

    by David Wallace

    That was real good keep it up man.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    I love this ones its wicke xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    Oh my goodness, i love your poems