I still can't tell you

by deadly sun   Feb 15, 2008


I told you today,
the way I've been feeling.
letting out all
the emotions I've been concealing.

unleashing my love,
and and telling you how.
i want to be with you,
right here, right now.

i asked for your heart,
in return for mine.
then you fell into my arms,
and uncontrollably began to cry.

you spilled out your thoughts
letting them all free.
explaining how all this time
you also wanted me.

but i can not do it
so i still do not know.
so i guess I'm still stuck here
watching you from my window.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Thea

    Really very good , i like the whole how you make us believe the whole situation and then show that its not real...
    your really good, she best have come around, cause this is really beutiful :)

    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    DANG!!!! This is a really good poem. It like the ending. I like how in the beginning you make it seem like the two of you are engaed in dialogue, but in the end it's all in your mind and that you still don't have her. This is really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Zvetty

    An amazing piece .... you must love that person ....

    *zvetty *

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Aww. i love the end, took a twist i didn't expect....great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan Murderscene

    Aww. I love this poem ur awesome :)

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