Comments : Pain

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like the way you wrote this...it's different. The syntax and the flow are not ones I'm used to, but they don't take away from the poem. I love how your emotions are so clearly stated with no confusion. Nice work. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Yuuki

    Thanks sorry for the late write bac its been decades since i been on here