Destiny=Misery

by lostsoul13   Feb 15, 2008


I hurt so much
Can't anybody tell?
I keep falling
Down this well
So full of pain
All my strain
I've got nothing left to gain
It's too late
To save me
From Fate
My destiny
Is to be
Alone
All alone
I hurt so much
Can't anybody tell?
Look at me fall
Watch me fall
Down this well
So full of pain
All my strain
I've got nothing left to gain
It's far too late
To save me
From Fate
My destiny
Is misery.

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  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I love how you ended the poem with your title...bery nice. all in all a really sad and emotional packed poem

    5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    This is so sad, I really hope that you don't feel this way. The flow was a little jerky but I think it suited the poem, nice use of repetition too =) 5/5

    Chin up,

    Em xXx

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