My Guardian Angel

by Michelle18   Feb 15, 2008


Voices whisper in my ear,
Telling me words that calm my fears.
Saying,"live life right,dont make the wrong mistake,
The words he's telling you are only fake."

"You think he wants love,but thats far from his mind,
Teenage boys only want one thing at this time."
He'll say,"you're the girl of my dreams,the one I need,
Then tell his friends she was so easy to please."

This voice keeps saying,"you're too young,think before you act,
He only wants bragging rights and I know this for a fact."
My guardian angel is the one I trust and believe,
So I look at this guy and say,"I'm not ready,please leave."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I love how all of your poems are short and simple. And at the same time, they flow soo well with good word choice. Another great write! Keep it up :P 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    I've seen this title on this site before. This poem was good, but it lacked the wow factor. It needed to be more captivating and more unique. Good try though. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. I don't think I could ever write a poem like this. I like the words in this poem. Shows a lot of feeling.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Wooo!!! Great poem with a powerful message, everyone should definitely take heed. Don't do it til you're ready. Fantastic rhyme, rhythm and flow.I really enjoyed reading this, 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh I just loved the truth here! Sometimes young girls are charmed with a jerk in a prince charming costume speaking the right words to only get there way. True but sad ...

    "He'll say,"you're the girl of my dreams,the one I need,
    Then tell his friends she was so easy to please.""
    ^this flowed so beautifull .. well done *5/5*

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