Now this is so true. I agree with it 100%. I have a "gaurdian angel" too that reminds me that guys only say stuff like that to get one thing. I wanted this one to be longer too! :[[ Maybe you should start writing longer poems. Haha. There were a few I's that needed to be capitalized. Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Oh I just loved the truth here! Sometimes young girls are charmed with a jerk in a prince charming costume speaking the right words to only get there way. True but sad ...

"He'll say,"you're the girl of my dreams,the one I need,
Then tell his friends she was so easy to please.""
^this flowed so beautifull .. well done *5/5*

Wooo!!! Great poem with a powerful message, everyone should definitely take heed. Don't do it til you're ready. Fantastic rhyme, rhythm and flow.I really enjoyed reading this, 5/5

Em xXx

Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. I don't think I could ever write a poem like this. I like the words in this poem. Shows a lot of feeling.

I've seen this title on this site before. This poem was good, but it lacked the wow factor. It needed to be more captivating and more unique. Good try though. 4/5

I love how all of your poems are short and simple. And at the same time, they flow soo well with good word choice. Another great write! Keep it up :P 5/5