by Blissful
I just loved the truth and reality you described here. It was real easy for many to relate to. All I would advise is to personalize the emotions more and make it more you. The descriptions seemed too simple for me but all in all I really enjoyed it. *5/5* |
Aww, sad poem. :[ I hope you're okay if this is true. I'm here if you need to talk or anything. Anyways, back to the poem. I thought it was really heart felt. The flow was a little of, but that's okay. I think the raw emotion in it make up for the flow. Great job! |
by Lemma
But I've lost my hope and my faith, |
by TheRapture03
That was really good. really strong emotion. Just remember that life isn't always dark. It tends to find a way to work out. 5/5 |
by Christina
Wow wat an amazing poem! its sad but very well written and i can relate to it!!! |