Last Chance

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Feb 15, 2008


I'm sitting all alone
With tears in my eyes
I'm tired of smiling
Because it's just a disguise

Sure, we're still together
But nothing's the same
Deep down I know
For me, you'll never change

I know your love
Is sincer and true
But sometimes I feel
Like I'm being used

No longer engaged
Degraded to 'just dating'
Sure, we're young
But I'm sick of waiting

If you love me so much
Then why is engagment so bad
Sweetie, for all you know
This could be the last chance you have

-Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I can't imagine what you must be going through right now but I really hope that you and Ethan make it through this and that writing makes you feel a little better, I know it does for me. This is a great poem, the rhythm and flow were fantastic and I can tell it came straight from the heart. My favourite lines were:

    "I'm tired of smiling
    Because it's just a disguise"

    Good luck, 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    It was cute and sweet. And you have a good point. ^^

    <3 u hun!
    5/5!

    -Lizzi-

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    This is so sad, specially after reading your profile. If your love is true between both of you it will be patient and wait. Hope you can continue to write such beautiful poems to help you out with the struggles along the way!!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    5/5 i LOVEEEE it!!!!

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