Awwww....*tears falling from my eyes* thats so sad...but very hopeful in the end..i loved it!!!!!!! one thing that kinda brought me out of the mood was the cursing in the poem...other than that...it was a beautiful poem. great job!! 5/5

Excellent writing i wrote a nine page poem on something like this "not lust another love story" but continue writing you have a gift

Oh!! it's sO heart-throbbing..4 a moment i waz like oh!!...it reallly made me cry.........5/5

Again amazing. i actually teared reading this. i dont know what i would do if put in a situation like that. the wording you used was so great i cant even come close to that. i love it