Ha this made me do an evil laugh when i was finsished reading it.
"Before I let my heart
Hit the floor,"

that last line kind of knocks out the flow of it. maybe if it was something like
"Before I let my heart
fall and hit the floor,"

well anyways. great write
5/5

The flow and pace at the beginning of the poem are great but I felt like it lost it a little towards the end. I like the metaphor about putting the fears and tears in a tub and drowning him in them. Full of emotion and straight from the heart. Great.

Em xXx

Oh my gosh! I absolutely LOVED the metaphors you used in this poem like, " let you drown in your fright." Very descriptive too.

I can really relate to this when it comes to my ex.

Good job, keep writting!
5/5

It's a good poem. I can actually feel the hate towards this man. Although, the flow was a bit rocky and the lines need a bit help. It's good though. I really liked it. Good job.

.:CiNdY:.

It's a good poem. I can actually feel the hate towards this man. Although, the flow was a bit rocky and the lines need a bit help. It's good though. I really liked it. Good job.

.:CiNdY:.

AWW THIS IS SUCH A SAD POEM , I ALSO WOULD LIKE TO POINT OUT THAT THE TITLE OF YOUR POEM IS GREAT, ALSO LONGER THAN YOUR OTHER TWO I READ BUT THIS ONE IS ALSO A GOOD WRITE!!!...=]...5/5