Letting go of Forever

by Lemma   Feb 16, 2008


I promise that I'll never leave you,
Not now, not soon, not ever.
One thing you can count on honey,
Is I'll never let go of forever.

I'll take the weight of the world from your shoulders,
I'll turn that frown into a grin,
I'll be the shoulder that you need to cry on,
And I'll be your strength from within.

I'll talk to you for hours on end,
Won't say a word when nothing needs to be said.
I'll give you a reason for living,
When you feel like you wish you were dead.

I know that we've had our problems,
But we've always put them right.
I'll never let go of you honey,
I'm not gunna give up this fight.

I promise that I'll never leave you,
Not now, not soon, not ever.
One thing you can count on honey,
Is I'll never let go of forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Ur so devoted to him
    lovely poem keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Woah this was awesome.....I liked to love attachment you put in this. I liked how you repeated the title too...this is poetry in its very natural primitive state and you captured its structure perfectly...good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Loved loved looooooved it ... =]

    its so sweet ..it reminds me of my boyfriend.. i think your boyfriend would really adore this poem.. it sounds like it came straight from the heart..

    nice job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "I promise that I'll never leave you,
    Not now, not soon, not ever.
    One thing you can count on honey,
    Is I'll never let go of forever."

    This poem was so beautifully written, and I can tell that you care about this person very much, whoever they are. The flow was perfect, and the emotions were intense. Amazing job, m'dear! :] Overall: 5.5

    - Steph.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Lovely, lovely poem darling! Sice I already read it, I though I should comment on it! :] It was sooo sweet. I'm sure your boyfriend is just going to LOVE it! Actually, I KNOW he will, because it came straight from your heart! Great jobb! :]

    Cayyyce xx

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