Lovely, lovely poem darling! Sice I already read it, I though I should comment on it! :] It was sooo sweet. I'm sure your boyfriend is just going to LOVE it! Actually, I KNOW he will, because it came straight from your heart! Great jobb! :]

Cayyyce xx

"I promise that I'll never leave you,
Not now, not soon, not ever.
One thing you can count on honey,
Is I'll never let go of forever."

This poem was so beautifully written, and I can tell that you care about this person very much, whoever they are. The flow was perfect, and the emotions were intense. Amazing job, m'dear! :] Overall: 5.5

- Steph.

Loved loved looooooved it ... =]

its so sweet ..it reminds me of my boyfriend.. i think your boyfriend would really adore this poem.. it sounds like it came straight from the heart..

nice job.5/5

Woah this was awesome.....I liked to love attachment you put in this. I liked how you repeated the title too...this is poetry in its very natural primitive state and you captured its structure perfectly...good job

Ur so devoted to him
lovely poem keep up the good work