Comments : There is no way

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Simple, cute and so effective. Only one little thing that I thought might make it that little bit better:

    "That I will keep loving you."

    Maybe adding a word in here would make the syllables make more sense e.g. "That I will keep on loving you."

    But overall I love this, I wish I could do such a good job of saying so much in so few words. 5/5 from me,

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Alyssia L K

    Oh well thank you!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Short and simple - It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.