Comments : It used to be me

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    I know EXACTLY how ypu feel and i couldnt have said it better myself

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    I know how u feel, however poetry wise, it doesnt have much flow to it, maybe counting out some rythm in it or something just adding commers etc might help.

    still really good tho think it just needs a lil work

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx