Really good, makes me feel the need to improve. BIG TIME. :) 5/5

Loooove it amazing poem. 5/5 great job <3

Absolutely a 5/5, very tight but this ending:
Some of the happiest moments of my life, were those I will never regret,
But how it all ended, how it all slipped away, is what I will never forget.

everyone can relate,