I really like this poem. Though the only thing i have to say really is that for other poems before you submit then re-read what you put for spelling mistakes and if you like missed words. B/c in here you had some that where spelled wrong && see if theres any confusing parts to you that you can fix.
ex.
i know thats not Ur flat its Ur mam is sick

like here fault is spelled wrong its spelled like flat && i think its should be if right? though other then that i think this poem is well done && i like how your telling a story and stuff so good job.

Thanks alot i do spell every time but i think i should read it again its good point thz for telling

Cute... Good JOB

Thz

Thz alot