Comments : In Sorrow For Eternity

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Amazing poem 5/5 very touching and full of emotion

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    This brought tears to my eyes, it's so sweet and sad. I love the repetition in the first section. My favourite lines:

    "I should have died
    Along side my wife to be
    But now I'm in sorrow for eternity"

    Beautiful. 5/5

    Em xXx