Amazing poem!Love it!The word choice was fantastic.It was a little short for my taste but none the less-awesome.5/5

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Nice work as an acrostic, good flow, great choice of vocabulary. All in all, 5, keep it up!

Its been a long time since a saw a poem in this way,(probally since primary school), but you took such a simple way of writing a basic poem, and turned it into something with your own flare and your own skill. very well done.