I really enjoyed your words in this piece. Its so calm and lovely. The tone is tranquil and I simply enjoyed it.

Favorite part:
Our love will last FOREVER
Or is... ETERNITY defined?
For those two words are trapped,
encased, in spans of time.

i really like the sweetness of this. romantic really. i really like how you tied in hourglass as the woman's body. this is really awesome!

Awe I remember your face when you gave this poem to me with a promise ring on Valentines day written in a huge card. Such a sweet and clever poem. It's nice to have a snapshot of the good times in our time together.