The Voice Of Reason

by Kittens Poems   Feb 16, 2008


The voice of reason
rings in my head
You told me not to
but I did it instead

You asked me why
I just a can't listen,
I have to be me
Sorry I cause so much friction

I learned a good lesson
I shall try not to dream
Cuz dreaming and reality
are not as they seem

Our marriage has been tough
I don't blame YOU for that
Would you have still married me
knowing I was like that?

A dreamer of dreams
I have so many of
They spin in my head
like a fiery web

The voice of reason
rings again in my head
This time it says
try and remember what I said.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    Thanks alot. I appreciate you commenting on my poems. sometimes there are not words that flow with the poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow. This is just amazing! Very well written. its simple, but powerful. Your rhymes werent at all forced and i liked ur choice of wording. I have to say in SOME parts, the flow was slightly off, to me. But apart from that its really well written. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    I love it. The flow, the words, the way you have expressed it is just spot on. well done, amazing job.
    5/5 & thank you vey much for your comment =)