Comments : But Who Will Listen To Me?

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    IwillIwill!!!

    ^^ Sorry I Had To Make The Comment xD

    But, Yea, The emotions felt are strong. The questions which everybody thinks about is right there, The simplest Ones that many don't even realize others are thinking. This was very well written. Keep Writing You're AMAZING!
    5/5

    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I loved this poem.
    I am able to relate to every single part of it.
    The last stanza was my favorite.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Man Ally she takes a whole lot out of my mouth but you know i will be there also. I will be the one trying to listen to you and hugging you till till you stop shaking or even stop crying, i will catch those tears of yours because i love you like if you were my own sister :DD but you know this poem shows pain and emotion from love but just another wonderful job :D

    CourtneyxHolland :)

    ~~5/5~~