An amazing write, as always. :] The title itself drew me in and it was an amazing read. The first and last stanzas were definitely my favorite one. Your descriptions were incredible and I simply love this! 5/5.

So basically the title was amazing .. as usual! Its so fun to read poetry that reflect flawlessly with its title. You started off so strong with such beautiful imagery and strong emotions that I was mesmerized. Each line was better then the next and the words you choose to write just completed each message. I think as the poem progressed .. your flow become a bit rocky foe me but the ending was just flawless so it made it complete for me. Overall an amazing write that I could relate with ... esp. the part of telling all his lies to the breeze .. flawless. Well done *5/5*

Great poem, Loved it. 5/5