Wow i love this poem
its sad but i can relate to it!!
5/5

<3 i love you silly

A very niecly written piece. You portrayed the emotions so well and so deeply. The flow was simply magnificent. And your choice of words weer impectable! An outstanding poem. 5/5.

...just awesome.. keep it up! ^^

Another great write from you, filled with greatly expressed, overwhelming pain. I could feel your emotions in every stanza which left truly powerful impression on me. This poem is deeply touching because it sounds so sincere, like it's written straight from the heart. The repetition through the piece is very effective, it created interesting rhythm.

5/5 from me