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by LOVEloveLOVE Feb 16, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
People look at me Do you know what they see? They see little miss perfect They see the fake me They see the smile I force on As I pretend not to feel I block out the problems of life And pretend nothing is real I'm not perfect I have my problems too The truth is I have no value But you don't believe me No one ever will Tonight I will die Beneath the window sill Then you will see I'm not who I pretend to be I'm not little miss perfect I'm a nobody
by Niinaa
Actually i get the flow your trying to do, but i suggest maybe some more decriptive words 4/5
Flow A tiny bit off in some parts, but in general a good poem , but some of the rhyming seemed forced
