I wonder

by Niinaa   Feb 17, 2008


I wonder if you hear me at night,
screaming out your name,
and hoping that you hear me;
hearing my pleading screams.

I'm wondering if you ever,
ever would forgive me,
for all the fight and lies;
Lies that hurt you deep inside.

& Maybe things could be normal,
at least maybe one day,
you can forgive the way I've acted;
The way i've acted lately.

I miss you so much;
so much that hurts,
the way you'd make me laugh;
Laugh so hard I'd choke.

So now I'm wondering this once,
To open your heart of gold
to let me back in ;
back in to your world.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Love this 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    I agree, this poem has alot of emotion in it, i really anjoyed reading it, it's very sad, hope things work out

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This poem could easily be trasformed into a song. It just flowed so beautifully and the reptition sounded like lyrics which was cool. I even added my own beat in my mind which made the poem come to life. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    This is a great poem, it has emotion in it, and a great poem needs that, for the most part i loved it. 5\5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    This was one of your better pieces. I think this poem had more emotion then the last piece I read. I think this poem as far as structure wass pretty good definitly better then the last one. So I'm going to give this poem a 5/5
    kaila

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