Your Imperfect Angel

by Lemma   Feb 17, 2008


My halo may be crooked
My wings a little bent
My aura slightly tainted
But be sure I'm heaven sent

To watch over you darling
To protect you from the pain
Your sacred umbrella
To shield you from the rain.

My chorus may be off-key
My cloud a little grey
My heaven not quite perfect
But I am here to stay

Through the good times and the bad
The sunshine and the storms
Your hallowed, holy blanket
To keep you safe and warm.

I'm your imperfect angel
And this I'll always be
I'll always be imperfect
But I'll always be me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by David Ensor

    I really like this, its cute and deep and real.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is an outstanding love poem with a flawless flow and excellent metaphors

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Beautiful.
    the structure is great: u interchange descriptions of your "imperfection" and descriptions of how much you love and care.

    the imaginary is great. the whole poem seems so light!

    ... maybe because of the words u use like "halo", "wings", "clouds", etc...

    ... or maybe because u use things like "slightly", "a little"....

    but i tend to think it's so light because of the emotion and love through it.

    i feel this poem is written with a bit of humour, much imaginery and lots and lots of love.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    It's great as it is! And "Imperfect" was a good choice. The flow to this poem was astonishing, the word choice was great, and the concept was brilliant! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    This poem, is wonderful!!! It has such a unquie touch!<3 You write with truth and this is a good title for the poem, "Imperfect" it just fits it!! Man i just love your poetry :]]

    I am going to read your quotes and read them :]

    But thank you for painting a pictures in my mind

    <3333

    TC!!!!

    CourtneyxHolland

    5/5

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