I love this poem its like the imperfect perfection if that makes any sense ... Also i agree it does seem a bit unfinished , but what is written couldn't have been better written great job 5/5

Wow. i love it!! imperfect angels are the best kind...<3 thanks for the comment on mine!

Lemma -

This is aboslutely beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Probably one of the best love poems that I've read in a while. It was relatively short, but it said so much. The flow was perfect, and your word choice was amazing.

"My halo may be crooked
My wings a little bent
My aura slightly tainted
But be sure I'm heaven sent"

^ Phenominal. :] Overall: 5.5
- Steph. <3

This poem, is wonderful!!! It has such a unquie touch!<3 You write with truth and this is a good title for the poem, "Imperfect" it just fits it!! Man i just love your poetry :]]

I am going to read your quotes and read them :]

But thank you for painting a pictures in my mind

<3333

TC!!!!

CourtneyxHolland

5/5

It's great as it is! And "Imperfect" was a good choice. The flow to this poem was astonishing, the word choice was great, and the concept was brilliant! 5/5

Beautiful.
the structure is great: u interchange descriptions of your "imperfection" and descriptions of how much you love and care.

the imaginary is great. the whole poem seems so light!

... maybe because of the words u use like "halo", "wings", "clouds", etc...

... or maybe because u use things like "slightly", "a little"....

but i tend to think it's so light because of the emotion and love through it.

i feel this poem is written with a bit of humour, much imaginery and lots and lots of love.
5/5

This is an outstanding love poem with a flawless flow and excellent metaphors

I really like this, its cute and deep and real.