Amazing from the first to the last line. Whole poem contains amount of heartfelt and truly touching emotions, excellently expressed. Every stanza holds very vivid and beautiful, complex imagery. Original and creative piece, truly deep.
My favorite lines are:

- Metaphor your heart into an ember of crisping flames,
Sorrowing the stanza lyrical lullabies cast the blames,-
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So effective, elegant and emotional.

Great and intense write, I enjoyed in every line.

Keep up
5/5 from me

Wow! Wow, you wrote this so fantastically, simply wonderful piece. I just want to say that your unique ideas impress me and I honestly think that you truly write one of the most brilliant poetry which I ever had pleasure to read.
This poem is so creative and it has refreshing atmosphere, you captured me with each line, I am deeply thankful for sharing this cause it was absolutely enjoyable read.
What you can do with three stanzas... that is mind-blowing!