Lol.... wow what a weird sexual fantasy... hmm... strange... but strange is good.. i like it 5/5

This made me giggle haha, I especially liked the "calling you my master" line. Kinky lol. Nice poem though, flowed really well.

5/5 yet again =)

Em xXx

Oh dear... you 2 don't live near each other do you? I fear Adam will be raped :( ... but then again. His response poem to this ... I don't think he'll be against it. So it's technically not rape :)

Good write, nice flow. 5/5

That made me flinch! It sounded so painful "Knives"?

Oooo... hunni, just WOW! Hot hot hot!! It was so intense, I couldn't tear my eyes away from it. This definitely made my mind go wild with fantasies.. GREAT JOB!! Keep it up!!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Yes funny, but if true it's scary. lol. 5/5

I don't really know what to make of this one honestly. lol. It's good, but crazy. The rhythm and flow was good. It was definitely something i've never seen before. Great job.

Its kinky , but naughty ! something simple like the pleasure of sex could be described in such a brief way (: looveed !

Wow Cayce you lil freaky girl!!! lol but that was funny and yeah it was really good!!!

Wow, that's all I can say

HAHAHAHA, this isn't one of your old ones.
But I couldn't help it; the link was just so tempting.
you've made a sex poem funny!

I'm dressed like a nurse
Hey, it could be worse
`you literally had me laughing out loud.

you kinky, kinky lass.
do i even want to know what goes on inside that brain of yours -.-;;

..__MiNDYY