Forever Remember

by TwistedAngel xx   Feb 17, 2008


Her finger trembled at his touch
Their eyes met and at that moment time stopped
Everything stood still and it was just the two of them
No one else could feel what they were experiencing
They were stuck in a time warp of emotions
Love, discovery, wonder and mystery
It all flowed through his fingers and onto her cheek
She could feel exactly what he was feeling
She knew her long and arduous search had come to an end
Finally she had found her other half (Plato was right)
She could see the flecks of black in his brown eyes
She could feel the small golden hairs on his muscular arm
She tried to soak up every minute detail
She wanted to forever remember this moment
Have it permanently etched into her heart and soul.
He held her face close to his and whispered every so softly
"I love you and always will,
nothing can change that, not even time standing still"

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Aaww that was so sweet
    love the title by the way, really makes the reader curious
    n_n cute

  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    WOW... thats all i can think at the moment.
    i really love this poem...
    it gives a really good sense of how you feel when your with the one that truly means the world to you.
    Keep up the amazign job.
    XxAshleyxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow. Beautiful. I could not help but smile throughout this whole piece. It was truly inspiarational and gave me hope that there is someone out there perfect for me and Hopefully one day me and him will cross paths. Flawlessly written. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by michael

    Wow that was amazing 5/5 so full of emotion must hav been a very special moment ...theyv got to be the moment we live for...keep up the good writing:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Great poem, full of emotions, Love it.