Comments : Ocean Wind Song

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, I am just speechless right now. Your poetry is outstanding and I'm blown away but its beauty! I especially love your nature poems, you have a way where you capture the indescrible beauty of nature:

    "Walking along a moonlit beach,
    The colors of night parade in a wind song,
    Pastel shades of seashore, reverberate like heartbeats,
    Night ruling high over this agate shore."

    So stunning, the word choice you used was brilliant and gave me a great visual!

    Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    I am humbled by your kind words, Breaking Dawn. I wrote that one after taking a walk at night on the beach in Delray, Florida many years ago. The ocean at night can be so inspiring.