Pressure

I can totally relate in this poem.. Emotionally and literally.. Nice poem!!!

Wow your word choice in this poem was great! You really get a tense feeling when reading this poem .. and you can really sense someone silently screaming out for help.

I reach out for help
But nobody's there...

That is an amazing way to end the poem. I love poems that end with " ..." I try to use that a lot in my poems too. It keeps the reading thinking even after they finish reading.

Nice job once again. =)

The sky's always pushing
The ground shoving back
Caught in a dream
A never-ending asthma attack

I reach out for help
But nobody's there...

they are my favorite lines
it is a great poem

Good job 5/5 keep up the good work

Aww no! Such a sad ending. Really effective imagery, gives a real sense of being trapped with no escape. 5/5

Em xXx