One Last Time...

Omg! i love this poem!! its so true and heartfelt. great job!!! 5/5

WOW this is like a perfect poem! Even though it is short it has soooo much meaning. Each line is really deep and filled with so much emotion. I actually read it a couple of times because it is just so beautiful!!

Kiss me again but not too
Fast
Savor our moment for it may be our
Last

I love the way you dropped the last word to the next line. It really does something for the poem and kind of makes it more interesting to read!

Tomorrow's not promised so savor
Today
Tell them you love them before they fade
Away...

The ending is just beautiful!.. Excellent advice that everyone should follow. If you love someone.. LET THEM KNOW before it is too late.

Excellent poem! Amazing job but im sure you already know that. More people should read this poem and appreciate it. It takes true talent to say so much with so few words.

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Yes! All the things you want to say to that special someone, before you can't. I like the way you came across with that.

Good poem shows alot toward what your feeling for the person good job 5/5

Nice poem.. its sweet. 5/5