by Miu Feb 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Hit me, hit my face, |
Hmm... Intresting piece from a grammer standpoint. you switch between proes and rhyme. Although its a tendency to stay in one form or the other I like how you have mixed it here. |
by cory
Wow you continue to amaze me with your deeply insightful poems.=) 5/5 |
by Ixora
I love when you said "Hit me to pieces". this is a great poem hun so dark but definetly something strong enough for a woman. sadly i can relate...its a shame what this world is coming to. |