I love when you said "Hit me to pieces". this is a great poem hun so dark but definetly something strong enough for a woman. sadly i can relate...its a shame what this world is coming to.

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Wow you continue to amaze me with your deeply insightful poems.=) 5/5
Cory

Hmm... Intresting piece from a grammer standpoint. you switch between proes and rhyme. Although its a tendency to stay in one form or the other I like how you have mixed it here.
While reading this piece I could defenatly get a clear picture of what was going on through out the entire poem. Sadly enough I can also relate to what you were saying. Too many people go through this and come out scard
Well Written