Comments : Fading to black.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sirrah

    I love it...good job =] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Aww this is so sad. My favourite line:

    "The lights where dimmed and we fade to black,"

    Although I think you mean "were." I like the repetition of this line as well. Some of the rhyme seemed a little forced but otherwise it's a great poem.

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    *tears fall down my cheeks* really good poem