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by Sirrah
I love it...good job =] 5/5
by Lemma
Aww this is so sad. My favourite line: "The lights where dimmed and we fade to black," Although I think you mean "were." I like the repetition of this line as well. Some of the rhyme seemed a little forced but otherwise it's a great poem. Em xXx
by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE
*tears fall down my cheeks* really good poem