Comments : Ill wait for you

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I like this it is PERFECT no grammical errors or anything

  • 16 years ago

    by erin girl

    I loved this poem, love poems are my favorite. The only thing i think you could change is just make it flow a little better, it was a little choppy towards the end, otherwise it was great, good job:]
    *E

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    Aww this was so sweet and written well...that was very nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really like this poem. I'm not I believe in a soulmate...but this poem is very good. Excellent job!

  • 16 years ago

    by mysterious

    Woow...great poem, i know how you feel.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    I love it ...
    And if all I have to do is close my eyes to find my love then I would do that without a doubt ...

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Nicole

    Great job this is how i feal about one on my closest guy friends love it and i really mean it 5+

  • 16 years ago

    by ImWaiting4Him

    This is a great poem and you worded it so perfectly i give you a 6/5..lol...Great Job!

  • 16 years ago

    by ImWaiting4Him

    This is my only favorite poem on here good job

  • 16 years ago

    by ilu

    What a beautiful poem!!!!!>..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    So ficking sweet!! 5/5 :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    I like this poem... reminds me of a past expericence.. great job keep up the good work!

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    Very nicewrite you knowif closing eyes is the way to find our love i'll close them for ever
    lovely work