Dear you,

by StandStill   Feb 17, 2008


Dear You,

Do you ever see me,
Or do you only see her?
does hurt you as much as it hurts me
when I'm around you, in my heart there is glee?
does it bother you that we can't be
a you and me?
Or does it hurt you that i love you
and there is nothing I can do?
Or does that starlight in your eyes
only shine for her, the love that is your sunrise
Or does it hurt you that i will always love you
and that you make my heart turn to goo?
Do you even see me
or do you only see her?

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really loved the title! The repetion was really great. Lots of people can relate to this one. The flow was amazing. You are really talented! Great job!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Aww i love this peom. it's so sad

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I like the repetition in this, and all of the questions. My favourite part:

    "Or does that starlight in your eyes
    only shine for her,"

    Beautiful metaphor. So sad.

    Em xXx

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