I like the repetition in this, and all of the questions. My favourite part:

"Or does that starlight in your eyes
only shine for her,"

Beautiful metaphor. So sad.

Em xXx

Aww i love this peom. it's so sad

I really loved the title! The repetion was really great. Lots of people can relate to this one. The flow was amazing. You are really talented! Great job!

Cayce xx