I look in the mirror

by StandStill   Feb 17, 2008


I look in the mirror
and what do i see?
i see a girl
who is trying to be me
she has big blue eyes
but they're hidden in shadows, hidden from sunrise
she has long blonde hair
but nevermore does she take a dare
she has thin, frail shoulders
that need to be colder
she has short, pink nails
with them, she will fail
she has long, thin legs
and her mind, one question it begs
I look and the mirror and i know what i see
but does anybody else see me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wooow! Amazing poem! I can relate a lot to it, as I'm sure lots of people can. The flow was really good. You did a great job and have a lot of talent!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by christopher

    Wow, this is really an awesome piece! all this plastic people.. i can truly imagine this person looking in the mirror.. well done, good job! ^^ and thanks for your comment!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow, i can relate to this poem, many can't see beyond the outside appearence

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    I like this It is really Good. It's more less I guess how I feel. People are so egotistical and can't see people for who they really are.

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