Rainy Face

by Zer0riginZ   Feb 17, 2008


Oh it... Oh it rains, Oh it rains, All her days...
Though she... Though she loves it, Though she loves it, tears break her face...
Moonlight... Accentuates it... It relates it...
To the place...
The place... Oh the place... Behind her face...
The memory reminds her of the days...

Oh it rains here... Though it rains dear... We're all here... ( For you...)

She asks herself... Everyday.
What's happening from day to day?
She asks herself..
What the hell happened anyway?

What am I suppose to say?

Rainfall as a whole, is leaving a hole,
I can't stress that her head is a mess...
Sweet serenity of losing one's soul,
from day to day she's feeling less...

Don't let her relive regrets... Please... ( Please...)

( Chorus)
...Oh it rains... Oh it pours...
She's there standing in the rain,
begs for it as it falls,
wave after wave of perfect crystal balls!
...Oh it rains... Oh it pours...
Asks herself how she's not yours,
its flooding her eyes,
wave after wave of perfection in her cries!
...Oh it rains... Oh it pours...

Broken bits of glass could fall,
still she'd stare up and take it all...
Her eyes are beautiful tonight...
As it rains... She falls out of sight...

Scarred and never shining right...

( As the crows feed in the field to the right...)

As the crows, feed outside in the field,
in the last place she kneeled...
Sweet precipitation keeps sealed...
Our true concern... In her eyes so unreal.

Regrets of what she had to feel... Displeased... ( Displeased...)

( Chorus)

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  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Hi Clam, it's me again - reading some of my old favorites...ran across this one. I sure do miss reading your stuff - still wishing I could hear this one in action. I love this piece - it's so awesome. I wish you were still posting so I could read recent stuff :(

    In any event I hope that you're well! Take care clammy.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I enjoyed so much in every line, incredible piece.
    You created a intense and unique rhythm and you also managed to make some overwhelming remarkable tone in the every part and you honestly impressed me with that.
    Bravo, beautifully written, you expressed emotions on a effective way and I like your choice of words, it posses some simplicity but it is still great.
    Few lines are truly amazing...

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    HOLY MOLY!!! Wow Mr. Clam I must say I have been blow away by this one! I mean I knew you were good but D D D DA DA DAAAMMMMMNNNNN!!!!! NICE!!!!!!!!

    I wish I could hear it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    I love this from the beginning to the end. Truly original and excellently written, filled with amount of very touching emotions. Every word seem perfectly picked and every description is absolutely brilliant and captivating. Truly overwhelming piece, elegant and beautiful yet filled with sorrow.
    Keep up~
    5/5

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