Wow...
I love this from the beginning to the end. Truly original and excellently written, filled with amount of very touching emotions. Every word seem perfectly picked and every description is absolutely brilliant and captivating. Truly overwhelming piece, elegant and beautiful yet filled with sorrow.
Keep up~
5/5

HOLY MOLY!!! Wow Mr. Clam I must say I have been blow away by this one! I mean I knew you were good but D D D DA DA DAAAMMMMMNNNNN!!!!! NICE!!!!!!!!

I wish I could hear it!!!!

I enjoyed so much in every line, incredible piece.
You created a intense and unique rhythm and you also managed to make some overwhelming remarkable tone in the every part and you honestly impressed me with that.
Bravo, beautifully written, you expressed emotions on a effective way and I like your choice of words, it posses some simplicity but it is still great.
Few lines are truly amazing...

Hi Clam, it's me again - reading some of my old favorites...ran across this one. I sure do miss reading your stuff - still wishing I could hear this one in action. I love this piece - it's so awesome. I wish you were still posting so I could read recent stuff :(

In any event I hope that you're well! Take care clammy.