I loved it....
It was a mirror of life...
but if I may suggest don't look at its reflection try to look at the real picture...I am sure you'll see something nice and pure...
in the smile off little children, in the kiss of two lovers or in the promise of life with each newborn...

keep writing

I love it. it is very very very good:). keep up the great work.

Briliant poem there! I really liked the ending part where it's all about what life is not about, so true!