by Kittens Poems Feb 18, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Through the eyes of a senior |
by Leah
I really like the flow to this poem. you are a very good writer, the one thing I do when I write is I hear the rythem in my head and I let the words wander out. It works! You also definately captured the feeling and the essence of being older. also, thanks for the comment on my new poem! |
by Sylvia
Very nice work. Now that I am a senior, I wish I had spent more time listening and learning from my elders, they do have so much to share, so many memories. Well done. |
I really apprecaite your comments on my poems. Thanks alot! |
Thanks for commenting on my poem. I appreciate it. |
by Ingrid
Awww..such an edearing write! |